The two big dogs

By Anonymous -

Thursday, 23  April 2020 - Writing

The Two  big  dogs

Two  cute  little  dogs  came  and  ate  7   magical 
biscuits  that  are meat  flavour.  They  loved   them  sooooo  much. They   could  get  big  and  they did.  Brian was  amazed  so  he  fainted  5  minutes  later.
Luckily  all  they  needed  to  do  was  to  drink  water to be small again.

Comments

  1. Jessica Neave23 April 2020 at 14:36

    Very creative writing Kaley! I love your idea about the dogs drinking the water to become small again! You also used some good describing words to add interest! Well done :)

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  2. Anonymous24 April 2020 at 11:51

    I like your story Kayley

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  3. Anonymous29 May 2020 at 13:11

    I write'id about that picture

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  4. Anonymous4 June 2020 at 14:05

    Hi Kaley Ailaah-Bree here i liked your post it was cool but i think that it was so cool there should be a part two.

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