live on earth.

By Anonymous -
We need  water and food so we can live. we can not live on Uranus and Neptune because they are very cold. and they have  poisonous gas.  If  you take one step on those two planets you will die in 2 seconds flash.
That is why you do not live on Uranus And Neptune and live on earth  its very warm!.
you should live on earth because its Lonely Planet planet you can live on. do not live .

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the green ones means i added words.
read ones means we didn't want it.



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